12-18-2009, 01:27 AM
I listened to all of them and these are my thoughts. Keep in mind that I have no experience whatsoever in this area, but an opinion can't hurt.
Dark Space - I didn't like the instrument that started at 0:54. It might just be personal taste, but it didn't feel like it fit in.
Snow Fairy - I think it would have been better if you made the chimes (?) louder and quieted down the rest. That might also give it a slightly more "snow" feeling.
Ghost Ship - The instruments didn't feel like they stayed on the same beat to me. That may just be my inexperience talking, though. :P
Simple Luan Tune - It sounded alright to me. I agree that it was a little sharp in areas, though.
Edits - Both of the edits are really good. :o
I think that you could improve some more by trying more edits. Although I'm certainly in a place to be telling you a direction to take, I think doing edits will give you a better ear for what kind of instruments sound good together, which would then carry over into your custom pieces. I might be wrong, though.
Dark Space - I didn't like the instrument that started at 0:54. It might just be personal taste, but it didn't feel like it fit in.
Snow Fairy - I think it would have been better if you made the chimes (?) louder and quieted down the rest. That might also give it a slightly more "snow" feeling.
Ghost Ship - The instruments didn't feel like they stayed on the same beat to me. That may just be my inexperience talking, though. :P
Simple Luan Tune - It sounded alright to me. I agree that it was a little sharp in areas, though.
Edits - Both of the edits are really good. :o
I think that you could improve some more by trying more edits. Although I'm certainly in a place to be telling you a direction to take, I think doing edits will give you a better ear for what kind of instruments sound good together, which would then carry over into your custom pieces. I might be wrong, though.
