12-13-2009, 08:39 PM
I have to agree with computer.
I really can't even judge or comment on the storyline yet because I'm having a hard time understanding your English. Do you have someone who can proofread and edit your language? That might be your best bet. Also, some screenshots would help but you said you are going to post some tomorrow so no big deal.
I really can't even judge or comment on the storyline yet because I'm having a hard time understanding your English. Do you have someone who can proofread and edit your language? That might be your best bet. Also, some screenshots would help but you said you are going to post some tomorrow so no big deal.