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Not that I'm much of a pixel artist. It hasn't been my forte. But perhaps soften the inner muscle lineart so it blends a little with the rest of the arms and legs. Nothing major.
That's a 'quick' spriting of Joanna ? Not sure about the thick ribbed lines in the cloak for ... is that supposed to be Raven? Last I collected Titans was the Judas Contract 3 parter.
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That is actually Cloak a Marvel comics character. I did that sprite of Joanna rather quickly. I think the hair took me the longest amount of time probably took me 10 minutes or a little longer for the whole thing. I guess it depends on what you would call quick. But I do see what you mean.
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If that is Cloak... do you have Dagger sprited? Not a Marvel Comics collector... Was collecting DC. Still... I know some of the obscure characters some don't.
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the calf muscles on the back right leg, maybe making them a bit more slim or curved around the lower part of that leg.
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I see what you mean Jay Jay it does look like it needs to be curved more I'll give it a try. Here goes edits I did of some DC comic characters DerVVulfman.
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I took a shot at April O'Neil.
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Her left hand kind of looks weird.
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Definitely gave that hand another try.
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Yeah, that's much better.
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Glad you liked that one here is another one out of my photobucket. Loki.