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Dialogue
#1
Hello guys, sorry for bothering. I not really good at english and keep making lot of mistake especially in grammar and structure.

That why i asked somebody to edit my dialogue. But the problem is i don't know if his work is good or not. So i hope someone can read his work and tell me should i used this?

Thanks
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#2
There's still a fair bit of spelling and grammar mistakes there. Are you looking for someone to re-edit this or what? I'll do it if you want me to, for the second edit. :P

- Jophie
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#3
Thanks for the offer Jophie, right now i just want to know people opinion first, but i will reconsider your offer :D.
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#4
Okay. When you need some editing work done, just shout at me.

- Jophie
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