BoF Rebirth
05-10-2011, 01:29 PM
Just pointing some "errors" on your last village screen, as I don't have time for a full comment.
![[Image: VpalE.png]](http://i.imgur.com/VpalE.png)
1 - What I marked, I believe, should be the right side of one house, right? Well, you should add a bit more contrast, it seems like it is connected to the ground, something I believe it shouldn't be.
2 - Just a strange tile position. The tree didn't blend right with the house. You should edit it, or put the tree away.
3 - Altough it repeats a lot of time, I marked it only one time. The top of the houses shouldn't be so square-like. It should be rounded, following the format of the house.
4 - Another blending problem. It would be a nice idea to edit this object to make it interact more with the tree, because it seems like it is floating.
5 - Not the biggest problem of the screen, just a tile you should decrease contrast.
Well, just that. You got a awesome work here, keep it 'till it's finished. Good Luck.
Best Regards.
1 - What I marked, I believe, should be the right side of one house, right? Well, you should add a bit more contrast, it seems like it is connected to the ground, something I believe it shouldn't be.
2 - Just a strange tile position. The tree didn't blend right with the house. You should edit it, or put the tree away.
3 - Altough it repeats a lot of time, I marked it only one time. The top of the houses shouldn't be so square-like. It should be rounded, following the format of the house.
4 - Another blending problem. It would be a nice idea to edit this object to make it interact more with the tree, because it seems like it is floating.
5 - Not the biggest problem of the screen, just a tile you should decrease contrast.
Well, just that. You got a awesome work here, keep it 'till it's finished. Good Luck.
Best Regards.
![[Image: YSZsD.png]](https://i.imgur.com/YSZsD.png)