My first try at pixel art
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I can't help you for anatomy things, but I think there's a problem with the right arm (her left one :0), maybe it's too short, the hand makes me feel the same way.

The left leg (her real left D: ) seems also weird. The lines could be cleaner, and the outline stops at the knee, it feels weird. Maybe you could continue the outline, but with a lighter color... Except that, I don't really see anything shocking, just try to clean the outlines.

Oh, the red thing around her could use a little lightning on the left ("red thing", yeah, I don't know the word :x). Nice boobs though, and I like her right hand (except that the bracelet doesn't really look like surrounding the wirst). o:

Fix this and you could work a little more on shadows/light effects on the jacket/legs. I think your light source is not really clear... It's coming from upper right ?

But, hey, I think that's nice for your first attempt, yep.
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My first try at pixel art - by Yin - 05-09-2009, 05:32 AM
My first try at pixel art - by MicKo - 05-09-2009, 10:21 AM
My first try at pixel art - by Yin - 05-09-2009, 05:15 PM

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