05-09-2009, 10:21 AM
I can't help you for anatomy things, but I think there's a problem with the right arm (her left one :0), maybe it's too short, the hand makes me feel the same way.
The left leg (her real left D: ) seems also weird. The lines could be cleaner, and the outline stops at the knee, it feels weird. Maybe you could continue the outline, but with a lighter color... Except that, I don't really see anything shocking, just try to clean the outlines.
Oh, the red thing around her could use a little lightning on the left ("red thing", yeah, I don't know the word :x). Nice boobs though, and I like her right hand (except that the bracelet doesn't really look like surrounding the wirst). o:
Fix this and you could work a little more on shadows/light effects on the jacket/legs. I think your light source is not really clear... It's coming from upper right ?
But, hey, I think that's nice for your first attempt, yep.
The left leg (her real left D: ) seems also weird. The lines could be cleaner, and the outline stops at the knee, it feels weird. Maybe you could continue the outline, but with a lighter color... Except that, I don't really see anything shocking, just try to clean the outlines.
Oh, the red thing around her could use a little lightning on the left ("red thing", yeah, I don't know the word :x). Nice boobs though, and I like her right hand (except that the bracelet doesn't really look like surrounding the wirst). o:
Fix this and you could work a little more on shadows/light effects on the jacket/legs. I think your light source is not really clear... It's coming from upper right ?
But, hey, I think that's nice for your first attempt, yep.