Maps and screenshots thread
02-09-2010, 02:17 AM
ok, i have been for this all day!
that map has some fatal flaws, and it is definitely not natural.
first you have a stairs leading to a mountain which is the same height from where the stairs is coming from.
eg. |- -|
eg. |-- |
eg. |-----|
| - mountain height
- stairs
that is impossible, or maybe you were going for that in the first place.
the second most fatal flaw:
the map is not detailed enough to be a nature/outside map.
p.s.
where did the broken branch from the tree go?
where did the leafs go?
why isn't there any kind of other small plants, and rubble which got blown there by the wind?
etc.
third fatal flaw:
the bridge that links the 2 mountains has a map tile error(made that up), the mountain overlaps the board on the bridge.
if you fix those, post another screen shot and i will critique again, ok!
if you were aiming for all that then i am terribly sorry for saying all those things about your map.
that map has some fatal flaws, and it is definitely not natural.
first you have a stairs leading to a mountain which is the same height from where the stairs is coming from.
eg. |- -|
eg. |-- |
eg. |-----|
| - mountain height
- stairs
that is impossible, or maybe you were going for that in the first place.
the second most fatal flaw:
the map is not detailed enough to be a nature/outside map.
p.s.
where did the broken branch from the tree go?
where did the leafs go?
why isn't there any kind of other small plants, and rubble which got blown there by the wind?
etc.
third fatal flaw:
the bridge that links the 2 mountains has a map tile error(made that up), the mountain overlaps the board on the bridge.
if you fix those, post another screen shot and i will critique again, ok!
if you were aiming for all that then i am terribly sorry for saying all those things about your map.
