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VN Premises - Mercenary - 05-11-2011
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RE: VN Premises - MetalRenard - 05-11-2011
Mercury Wrote:it's your time, so I don't really care.That's not the attitude to adopt when you're asking people:
- To read your work
- To leave you helpful feedback
- To be kind about work you're not too confident about, "I know it sucks, but I did a rush job".
As for the work, I like it, we discussed it on the IRC a bit and I know it has some unexpected turns but I won't say anything about that apart from that it's good.
Keep it up.
RE: VN Premises - Mercenary - 05-11-2011
Yessir.
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Added another. It was originally going to be an RMXP project, but when I realized that I was spending more time with RMXP on another idea of mine, and I had more short stories on this written than I had work done for it, that I should just make it a story/VN. More will be added, still.
Again: Feedback is appreciated.
RE: VN Premises - Mercenary - 05-28-2011
Updated again, unfortunately with only one more added premise. I'm a lazy lazy man.
Anyway, it's not my best at all, as the idea came to me earlier today, and I lost all spunk after actually writing it. My determination led me through, however. !
Well,..yeah. It was rushed and I spent little time editing, but feel free to pleasure yourselves with the read. Feedback is always appreciated, remember.
^^
RE: VN Premises - xnadvance - 05-28-2011
Very picturesque works my friend!
It's almost like playing Shadow of the Colossus with your latest work. ;)
RE: VN Premises - Mercenary - 05-28-2011
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Thanks. I try-- that seems to be one of the things I'm actually capable of doing nicely (painting pictures for ya).